Sunday, June 10, 2012

early morning by Monique

Awoke to A midnight mist the birds still yawning in the fog.
Dad alarm has not gone off yet.The condensation on the window sun shining on the condensation like millions of crystals.the curtians were dustyand the sun was just peering through.

My trunk was hidden in the mist. My duvey was no more.My floor was gone.Adventuring out into the kitchen for a midnight snack. beating my heart was when I opened the fridge door. Yaaa! oh no!

A thumping noise oh it was only my mum snoring.I could see the sun crying through.Were's the food? perhaps the food fairy took it.

3 comments:

  1. Missy, I love all the beautiful describing words you used. They really painted a picture for me, however, I am sure you were mistaken about the snoring. It would have definitely been your father. Great work Monique. Keep that writing coming. Much love Mom xoxoxo

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  2. your story is awesome

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  3. cool story it sounds realy awsome nice work monique from zane

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