As promised kids
mayfair7 - 2012!
Friday, December 28, 2012
Thursday, December 6, 2012
maddy's hiding story
the sun goes down call out to my mum. a girl crawls past. i hide stay with fear that i will get found i want mum to call other wise i can't see her but i can hear her a big shadow comes at the back of me then it picks me up i scream it looked back there was my mum i was happy then we went home and got something to eat
Tuesday, December 4, 2012
Thursday, November 22, 2012
Splash planet
"I will give you ten miniutes to losde your energy then meet me back here" says an adult.Boston and I run off to the black hole, theres water everywhere.We slip and slide up the stairs.the smell of chlorine fills my nostrills.I grab my mat and wait in line. Screaming comes from a familiar voice and i relise its me.Splashing into the pool!"lets go to the lazy river" Boston says to me but how long has it been! "not that long she says!" We hop off our tube and get out of the lazy river.Ten minutes is long gone!
"my legs are killing me" i tell Boston "same here she says." I start nibbiling at my fingers Boston senes my worries "whats wrong" "nothing" I lie, but inside i am secretly this is a big place to get lost in and theres about 500 people here, but the other part of me is saying sweet no adult!"Boston lets go to the go carts!"
"theres the go carts Boston says "yep thats them" Boston starts walking in that direction, but i am frozen solid I see a head, the blond hair and the curls they are all so fimaila "lucy', "boston" she says,Boston turns and sees her too! "hello girls she says with arched eyebrows, she is'nt saying anything but i know she wants an explaination
"we were at the lazy river!" i say. Walking back feeling half relived we were found yet also a bit disappointed.
Ditching my sister for the TV
Yes Im in, counting one to ten. I could hear my dad and mum making a delicious meal. Relaxed and settled. All wound up like a toy robot. Still cant be bothered looking for her , Might as well give up and watch Tv. While it took about one minute , Suddenly my sister feels all impatient
Waiting , tired , giggling foot steps creeping behind. “ I wonder how she feels now, with dark shadows surrounding her. Playing hide and seek must be easy. Suddenly cartoons popped out of no where I imagined her body feeling like a massive big sweat like stiff and tired. With a sister like that theres no way she can win. But she popped out of nowhere and I almost got a heart a tack, I told you she cant win!!!
HIDING AWAY FROM MY DAD
“Oh no it was a bad choice after all. I said to my sister”. We quickly ran under the couch through the big whole we made last week. When we got in I could see the dark patterns surrounding my sister and I .It was dark and scary under the couch and the wood was as rusty as my old rusty bike. I could hear dad whispering as. As well as I could smell the nice fragrant powder mum puts all over the couch. When dad walked in I knew he knew what we had done.
My sister and I crouched down as far as we could go. My legs and hands were getting numb and sore. I couldn’t take it anymore. I just wanted to fall back and relax. Then suddenly I could hear dad thumping and getting closer and. My heart was beating so fast. Then in about a minute or so, I could see a big angry gorilla heading straight towards my sister and my hiding spot.
My sister sneezed so loud that our dad shooed us out. I saw big hairy arms reaching out towards me “AHHH! I SCREAMED”. Dad pulled us out from under the couch and yes! Next was the big growling, as usual.
Hide and seek on the street
A bunch of trees surrond me I hide beneath the branches.
Our seeker passes I am no where to be seen.
Sore are my muscles i hide in my blindness.
I giggle as my seeker appears through the light
i'm winning. Stay dumb. I began to see a shadow come towards me.
She walkes past I pull my legs in slightly. see spots me!
I began to giggle "i thought i was winning." Wednesday, November 21, 2012
Monday, November 19, 2012
lost in the crematorium
''mum dad where are you I can't find you, please come out! plaese''.I will try to find you please come out! I walked around the frount. I saw them walking down the road so I ran and they jumped in the car. Ishouted to say stop they kept on going. I saw the undertaker making the coffin for my uncle besause he died. Afew days after thecoffin was made we went to the crematorium to grab the coffin. I got lost around the back of the crematorium. Isaw my aunty to tell her to take me home.
Ican smell death going down my throat so I ran to the van jumped in. aunty said ''where mum and? I said they're gone. Iwas lost around the back I was watching our uncle getting cremated. which means burnt. mum dad I got out of the van. Ran to my mum and dad! I finally found you. I hugged them and crying to them.
when I was in the van Iwaswrapped up, feeling pins and needles.Feels like a control vibrating. sounding sad to I was because I was shaking like a rumbling earthquake. Earthquakes are bigger than shaking yourself. My wish came true that my mum and dad came back, I cried when knowone was looking.
Ican smell death going down my throat so I ran to the van jumped in. aunty said ''where mum and? I said they're gone. Iwas lost around the back I was watching our uncle getting cremated. which means burnt. mum dad I got out of the van. Ran to my mum and dad! I finally found you. I hugged them and crying to them.
when I was in the van Iwaswrapped up, feeling pins and needles.Feels like a control vibrating. sounding sad to I was because I was shaking like a rumbling earthquake. Earthquakes are bigger than shaking yourself. My wish came true that my mum and dad came back, I cried when knowone was looking.
Hiding at cornwall park, Morgan
Hiding silently.Prickly,sore,thorny,holes in the bush.The smell of flowers and pollen creeps quietly up my nose.I can hear my brother talking to himself.I have to hide from my brother,in trouble.The very low bush reminds me of being under my bed with thorns.I have to stay hidden.
My legs are tired,stiff and shaking with soreness.I start getting worried.What if they never find me?,but then I remember something funny.I took of my shoes and hat by the lake to make my brother think.My body starts to shake with happiness.I start giggling to myself.I hope nobody heard me and I also hope I win this game.
Some short,blonde hair comes straight towards me.My heart pumping,pumping fast,I`m scared.I wonder who it is,oh it is only my brother,he must have heard me laugh.Lachlan comes creeping so quietly towards the bush.'' I've found you''he shouts.He splits the bush in two.''Ouch''he yells''I've got a thorn in my hand.''I feel really happy that I have won but sad that I have to go home now.
Isaiah,spot light in the orchad story
Ready or not here I come.The bitten apples have surrounded me.Black croaking crows and the whistling wind.In the tallest tree you can ever imagine.This is horror world. I snap branches to make a seat. I feel poor
My legs,arms,head are numb.This big body of mine feels like jelly.Cant move a muscle,they ve turned off.
I think they went to sleep.Come on Come on i can win this.OH NO! they re coming.The invisible people
have climbed up with me.They have brang there big pins and needles.PING PANG STAB!
The little sun moves left and right.You can tell Im the winner.His chattering teeth,hes always a whimp.I try turn around, a branch snaps and falls on his head.The torch went up.His face went pale.I crunch up as ball
.A giant ball.In my camouflage green.I found you Isaiah.I jump down.He says your the winner.Are you sure because wheres my evil twin?Perhaps hes in the real horror world Mmmmmwwwaa haaaa! AAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
THE END.
My legs,arms,head are numb.This big body of mine feels like jelly.Cant move a muscle,they ve turned off.
I think they went to sleep.Come on Come on i can win this.OH NO! they re coming.The invisible people
have climbed up with me.They have brang there big pins and needles.PING PANG STAB!
The little sun moves left and right.You can tell Im the winner.His chattering teeth,hes always a whimp.I try turn around, a branch snaps and falls on his head.The torch went up.His face went pale.I crunch up as ball
.A giant ball.In my camouflage green.I found you Isaiah.I jump down.He says your the winner.Are you sure because wheres my evil twin?Perhaps hes in the real horror world Mmmmmwwwaa haaaa! AAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
THE END.
Walking out the gate
Leaves surround me as they fall to the ground.The stench of grass gets to my nose.Dirt covers me, as i sit silently.Green leaves wrap around like a big green blanket.Hiding from my dad.I'm an adventurous little girl.
Sitting! I don't know what the time is.how long have I've been sitting ?My feet are sore.Pins and needles are running though my feet.Looking around at the leaves,path.I stop and listen i can't hear a thing looking around i see something crawl over.What is that?.
I listen i hear someone calls my name "briar briar"crawl back to the front of the bush.foot steps come closer and closer they stop where i am hiding.i giggle Mum grips me in a hug.Walking back i fall asleep thinking .
What will my next adventure be????
Go home, Stay home.
Mr Tregonning yells "GO". The taggers run into the game. You can't trust anyone. The big fence and tree makes me feel short. I take a step. "Crunch." I stept on a pile of crunchy brown leaves. Oh no! I'm surrounded with them. Birds chirping, leaves crunching and taggers tagging.
Will he find me, will I win, will I lose? My legs hurt, I must sit down. My arms are relaxed, I must wake them. My bum is numb, I must stand. He's coming. I must run, before it's too late.
Slowly walk around the tree. Don't make a noise, don't make any sudden movements. Laughter gets louder and louder. Then it stops. All that's left to do is run. Before I know it, the tagger is chasing Kaitlin, Emily and I. "GO HOME STAY HOME 123" Kaitlin, Emily and I screamed. I wish we could have another round. And we did.
By Charlene
Will he find me, will I win, will I lose? My legs hurt, I must sit down. My arms are relaxed, I must wake them. My bum is numb, I must stand. He's coming. I must run, before it's too late.
Slowly walk around the tree. Don't make a noise, don't make any sudden movements. Laughter gets louder and louder. Then it stops. All that's left to do is run. Before I know it, the tagger is chasing Kaitlin, Emily and I. "GO HOME STAY HOME 123" Kaitlin, Emily and I screamed. I wish we could have another round. And we did.
By Charlene
Hiding under the campervan
Hiding, under the camper van I was, the smell of green grass is deadly to my noise. Fireworks going off before my eyes. Scared. It was my first time under the camper van in the field.
shaking,It was like I was lying on broken glass. Flat on the grass trying not to laugh as my cousin trips and giggles. Is she going to look under here? Spiders dangling before me, web tickle my nose.I feel like I'm going to sneeze don't sneeze I told myself.
She is in front of me, I'm scared. Is she going to find me ..."Hi Monique" she says "I found you" "come out don't be shy" My cousin talks to the camper van be side me!
shaking,It was like I was lying on broken glass. Flat on the grass trying not to laugh as my cousin trips and giggles. Is she going to look under here? Spiders dangling before me, web tickle my nose.I feel like I'm going to sneeze don't sneeze I told myself.
She is in front of me, I'm scared. Is she going to find me ..."Hi Monique" she says "I found you" "come out don't be shy" My cousin talks to the camper van be side me!
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