Wednesday, June 27, 2012
Thursday, June 21, 2012
Early morning By Nathan
Early in the morning it was so foggy that you can't see anything.It was so foggy and dark that I walked strait in to a fence.A red light in the sky oh it was just a bird,A car,my reflection wasn't there,in the mirror I couldn't see my reflection.My body was shivering and all I could see was my shadow through the fog.All of a sudden I heard my heart beating faster and faster.I heard a sound ah.it's only a branch I could fell the wind.Where's the school?Perhaps a Giant stepped on it with his stinky feet "poo!.
earlymorning story,isaiah
Bedroom was black like the night sky.It was so dark I couldent see a thing.The moon had knocked out the sun.White fog was ready to shiver me.Scooter had vanished same as my nerf gun and my hulk teddy ran away grumpy.I tiptoed to the microwave to get a pizza.Bloodshot my eyes were when I looked in the mirrow I freaked out.Mums alarm went off so I sprinted to my bedroom like a cheetah mum would see the microwave open.The air was frezzing I peaked out the curtain was open.How did the window open?perhaps the window man opend it.
Wednesday, June 20, 2012
Wednesday, June 13, 2012
Lucys Early Morning
Walking through the hallways of black darkness the usually patterned wallpaper was now bare.I could faintly hear my family snoring.The scamper of my cats feet made me jump.
There was no panel heater distracting me the TV wasn't blaring and there was a deadly silence.
The dusty light was the only way i could see.darkness in the house, darkness around me.The big hand was creeping around making the clock tick.
Walking down the the hallways trying to be as quiet as possible one two whoa i tripped over!The carpet was soft as i laded with a crash Looking down at the culprit of my fall i was terrified standing up.I was surprized when i relised it was my brothers cars but even so they looked ready to charge!
Dodging all the furniture the unfamiliar door frame won all of my attention.Wheres the light brown paint?Prehaps if i was awake a magical fairy had come and replaced the door frame with dark brown paint.
There was no panel heater distracting me the TV wasn't blaring and there was a deadly silence.
The dusty light was the only way i could see.darkness in the house, darkness around me.The big hand was creeping around making the clock tick.
Walking down the the hallways trying to be as quiet as possible one two whoa i tripped over!The carpet was soft as i laded with a crash Looking down at the culprit of my fall i was terrified standing up.I was surprized when i relised it was my brothers cars but even so they looked ready to charge!
Dodging all the furniture the unfamiliar door frame won all of my attention.Wheres the light brown paint?Prehaps if i was awake a magical fairy had come and replaced the door frame with dark brown paint.
Sunday, June 10, 2012
early monring story by Jasminegrace
My bedroom is glowing with light.The sun was not yet risen,the birds were not chirping and my door opened its mouth and gleared at me in the shadows.
The slippery grass was covered in a yeit's fur, the nextdoor treehouse was vanished into thin air, my drawers were a blob in darknes, my tv was just a black door.
Sneaking and being sly to get my nintendo and exploring the darkness.To the kitchen and back A glance got my eye.Dusty desert my throat is like.Who is that beined me... oh mum its you.Kids shouting there lungs out,I touch the freezing floor.I smell the cold air. where is the floor who took my floor? mayby it had growed legs and ran away.
The slippery grass was covered in a yeit's fur, the nextdoor treehouse was vanished into thin air, my drawers were a blob in darknes, my tv was just a black door.
Sneaking and being sly to get my nintendo and exploring the darkness.To the kitchen and back A glance got my eye.Dusty desert my throat is like.Who is that beined me... oh mum its you.Kids shouting there lungs out,I touch the freezing floor.I smell the cold air. where is the floor who took my floor? mayby it had growed legs and ran away.
Hannah's Early Morning Story
Cold air filled my lungs, trudging through the hallway. Dark in the house, dark outside. The birds were waking up and chirping. The sun was still asleep.
Frosty grass was around the house. Flowers were hidden by the frost, the usually colourful trees were nothing but dim green and there was no reflection of me in the mirror.
I tip-toed over to the fridge, hoping to get a snack, hoping to get a drink. Damp were my cold toes walking across the lino. A faint light shone through the fridge door. Heavy breathing filled the room and my sister was sleep-talking.
The glare of the sun was shining through the blinds. Where were the windows? Perhaps a clown had smashed them, and taken the glass away.
Frosty grass was around the house. Flowers were hidden by the frost, the usually colourful trees were nothing but dim green and there was no reflection of me in the mirror.
I tip-toed over to the fridge, hoping to get a snack, hoping to get a drink. Damp were my cold toes walking across the lino. A faint light shone through the fridge door. Heavy breathing filled the room and my sister was sleep-talking.
The glare of the sun was shining through the blinds. Where were the windows? Perhaps a clown had smashed them, and taken the glass away.
It was eleven o'clock at nightIt was dark and scary and i was walking home.Iopen the door it wasdamp and dark.I looked back the jug was boiling i looked back again and no one was around then it stoped.I ran down the stairs and i locked myself in my room.Hmmm i couldn't find the light it wasloke i wasin a horror movie.A little bit of light shined through the window.
early morning by Molly
The classroom wascloaked with darkness, The sun was still in bed. White frost freezing on the windows. I could not see anything, it was like some - one had flicked the lights off that I couldn't turn on.
I was creeping into the classroom to get my homework so the teacher would not catch me.
Creeping was my body to hide from the freezing cold. AGGGH! what was that sound i thought I caught a glimpse of something lurking in the shadows.
Sounds of laughter fill my ears when i was walking out of the classroom. Smells of the tempting hot-chips, laves rustling in the wind.
Frost on the grass, frost every-where, frost all around me.
Where is the frost covered school? perhaps JackFrost has come and hidden the school in his white blanket
I was creeping into the classroom to get my homework so the teacher would not catch me.
Creeping was my body to hide from the freezing cold. AGGGH! what was that sound i thought I caught a glimpse of something lurking in the shadows.
Sounds of laughter fill my ears when i was walking out of the classroom. Smells of the tempting hot-chips, laves rustling in the wind.
Frost on the grass, frost every-where, frost all around me.
Where is the frost covered school? perhaps JackFrost has come and hidden the school in his white blanket
Early Morning by Jaydey
Room was dark and damp once I woke up. Alarm ringing at 6.00 clock. Sun was still sleeping from that party yesterday. Outside the window there were puddles everywhere. Out the window flower were hidden behind hail,there was no grass I couldn't see,door was hidding. My body is wriggling around to warm itself up.
Creeping down the hallway trying to find the bathroom.Streching my legs through the hallway busting to go to the bathroom. Attack my cat was killing me. I ran in the bathroom and heard my stomach say '' breakfast''. Cat was charging right at me, I was anoyed from the alarm ringing, pet drop a really smelly bird on the floor.
The sun is slowly melting the frost of my window. Wheres my snack? It may been eaten by a imaginary friend perhaps.
Creeping down the hallway trying to find the bathroom.Streching my legs through the hallway busting to go to the bathroom. Attack my cat was killing me. I ran in the bathroom and heard my stomach say '' breakfast''. Cat was charging right at me, I was anoyed from the alarm ringing, pet drop a really smelly bird on the floor.
The sun is slowly melting the frost of my window. Wheres my snack? It may been eaten by a imaginary friend perhaps.
early morning by briar
Awake it was like a dark shadowy cave.it was damp and misty The clouds were like a blanket covering the sun .
Misty in the air misty on the ground the floor boards creep under my feet i hope I'm not caught.as i walk to the kitchen to get a midnight snack from the pantry.
creaking the floor was trying to silent i could hear my dad snoring as i walk past there door.Into the lounge i walk forward bam!!!!!!! i crash was that there before ?
perhaps i had dreamed it.
creaking the floor was trying to silent i could hear my dad snoring as i walk past there door.Into the lounge i walk forward bam!!!!!!! i crash was that there before ?
perhaps i had dreamed it.
brooke early morning story
My bedroom was dark and dim as it wakes me up slowly. Dark and dim dark and wet. My curtain stares at me like a man in the darkness.lots of clothes on the floor. The misty windows cry with coldness. There was no bright colored surf duvet on my bed the dogs kennel was hidden under a white cold mist the bight colored car was not shining in the sun.Walking through the creepy house I hope nobody heard me. silent I was walking through the house my feet were cold i could hear my mum snoring and my sister talking in her sleep i was thinking that my mum would catch out of bed when i,m not meant to. in the lounge the fire is almost out. how did that get lit? maybe a fairy came and put magic dust on it
cassidy's early morning story
I awake.The room was dark.It was early hours in the morning the moon was still out and all i could hear was snoring.The sun had not yet risen the birds were just beiginnig to awake.The cold air sweeps under my door.Iwent to lean on my drawit was like it was hidden I reach for my remote it was like a shadow inthe night.Sneeking through the coradors trying to get to the computer blind i was kept on crashing through walls.Hmmm somethings cooking.Walk into the kitchen no one in there.I search around the house.No one's up.I walk out of my room it makes me jump.I turn my back for just a while a shadow and i saw but it wasn't mine.Huh whos that shadow?
Early morning by Hastings
Yawning when curtians open,breakfast on table. The hours has been past, and it was still cold at 6.30
With guled eyes and messy hair still the sun had not risen.
Brrr!'' have you ever looked outside. Open your curtians to look' it's cold it has freezing misty wind, with icicles.there i was looking at the garden but it vanished before my eyes. My hat was gone i came back my mirror showed no reflection.
my body felt all numb and i couldn't breathe just a second. I was here for a mission to eat the biggest cup cake ever.warm my pjs were like a blanket. Sniffing for the biggest,bestest cupcake imagining it' was smoking hot.Walking to the fridge.Still the hallway has scary photos on the wall.
'where's the light? perhaps the toothfairy took it.
With guled eyes and messy hair still the sun had not risen.
Brrr!'' have you ever looked outside. Open your curtians to look' it's cold it has freezing misty wind, with icicles.there i was looking at the garden but it vanished before my eyes. My hat was gone i came back my mirror showed no reflection.
my body felt all numb and i couldn't breathe just a second. I was here for a mission to eat the biggest cup cake ever.warm my pjs were like a blanket. Sniffing for the biggest,bestest cupcake imagining it' was smoking hot.Walking to the fridge.Still the hallway has scary photos on the wall.
'where's the light? perhaps the toothfairy took it.
early morning by Monique
Awoke to A midnight mist the birds still yawning in the fog.
Dad alarm has not gone off yet.The condensation on the window sun shining on the condensation like millions of crystals.the curtians were dustyand the sun was just peering through.
My trunk was hidden in the mist. My duvey was no more.My floor was gone.Adventuring out into the kitchen for a midnight snack. beating my heart was when I opened the fridge door. Yaaa! oh no!
A thumping noise oh it was only my mum snoring.I could see the sun crying through.Were's the food? perhaps the food fairy took it.
Dad alarm has not gone off yet.The condensation on the window sun shining on the condensation like millions of crystals.the curtians were dustyand the sun was just peering through.
My trunk was hidden in the mist. My duvey was no more.My floor was gone.Adventuring out into the kitchen for a midnight snack. beating my heart was when I opened the fridge door. Yaaa! oh no!
A thumping noise oh it was only my mum snoring.I could see the sun crying through.Were's the food? perhaps the food fairy took it.
Early Morning By Journey
It was damp and fogy at the school court. Fog floating around me fog standing there weird. Cold as a penguin
Frost started to melt off trees and flowers.I could not see a thing it was merged and hidden. blank, white everything gone only shadows. Stars fading away from earth the moon half way gone speeding around the court to get warmer.Pumping, so fast my heart was.I couldn't barely talk. Sun rising up i started to warm up.Running around the court i notice that it was wet so i stopped. But no rain.Where did the water come from? perhaps a clown spread water on the court it was strange.
Thursday, June 7, 2012
early morning
the dark misty black sky coverd the sun clouds covering like a black and misty cover it was dark the shadows were scary the sun was dim the sun was not seen dark misty fog krept in under the door the hidden garden in the misty fog the dark coved my computer in my room the scary shadows of my trash pack ade me shake scared of the shadows so i looked a way slame i walked in to a wall cold feet shivering gazing out the window i see frozen flowers by liam
early morning by jonty
The school yard was dark and scary.Cars driving past with really loud radios screaming out it is 4.30.
Cars driving how close? There are echoes saying there is a misty storm coming.Frost is making my eyes break like glass.
THE rugby posts have vanished.So have the soccer goals/playgrounds and netball hoops but not the dark sided scary thing. because I got hit by a dodge ball.
searhing the school to make sure i'd been in every room and spot before I leave mayfair school.But I think the school has been hiding some thing.could it be a hungry animal crunching on some meat.i'm so cold i'm sliding round like an ice cube.Every time I hear a weird noise I jump like a grass hopper.
crunch went the huge brick.Falling off the huge dusty building.Hitting the big concrete court.Listening to my screams.Bones are poking through my skin.
Drips are falling although it hasent been raining.it looked as though Mr Crawford had pushed me off the top of the building.Why would he do that?
Perhaps it was a robber trying to steal stationary for his kids!
Cars driving how close? There are echoes saying there is a misty storm coming.Frost is making my eyes break like glass.
THE rugby posts have vanished.So have the soccer goals/playgrounds and netball hoops but not the dark sided scary thing. because I got hit by a dodge ball.
searhing the school to make sure i'd been in every room and spot before I leave mayfair school.But I think the school has been hiding some thing.could it be a hungry animal crunching on some meat.i'm so cold i'm sliding round like an ice cube.Every time I hear a weird noise I jump like a grass hopper.
crunch went the huge brick.Falling off the huge dusty building.Hitting the big concrete court.Listening to my screams.Bones are poking through my skin.
Drips are falling although it hasent been raining.it looked as though Mr Crawford had pushed me off the top of the building.Why would he do that?
Perhaps it was a robber trying to steal stationary for his kids!
Early morning by Charlene
At school on the field of horror all I could see is black, grey and white. Walking on the wet grass a breeze ran up my spine. It was at less 5:30am. The grass was so wet people could just slip in like mud. A pole vanished in the dark, grass was gone and class rooms were blobs. I walked up the grass, a shadow was there but... not mine. Beating my heart was. Felt as though I could have a hard-attack, could only see black blobs. The desk were gone, the green room was replaced with a black room. Perhaps the shadow is fat and sitting in the black room...
Early moring by Caleb.
I woken my PlayStation set was normally there but hidden in the dark. there was a floating red light. I tried to find my romate for my t.v. it was like it was stolen. I was touching mid air. My bookshelf was gone but i could feel it. I shuffled out of my bed and walking into the living room bang my head went into the wall. I couldn't see the light so my chance was north east. wheres the chocolate!! maybe the ran away!!!
Early Morning By Hineatu
School was dark and dim The mist was airy the mist was cold The clouds are like a blanket covering the sun
Mist fills my lunges i can feel the crunchy frost beneath my feet The pointy grass hiding beneath the frost The oak tree was now where to be seen Walking through the grass feeling the coldness i start to explore frozen my toes were Walking through cold grass Dogs barking,frost,moving,teeth chattering The frost was white like a blanket covering our plants.
Mist fills my lunges i can feel the crunchy frost beneath my feet The pointy grass hiding beneath the frost The oak tree was now where to be seen Walking through the grass feeling the coldness i start to explore frozen my toes were Walking through cold grass Dogs barking,frost,moving,teeth chattering The frost was white like a blanket covering our plants.
Early morning,by Jahvarn
I woke up the tv floated in the air with the playstation 2 saying play me!
It was misty I saw a ghost drifting past saying it's one o'clock.
Early Morning by Kaitlin
The whole school field was covered in a white blanket of frost.
Trees were getting wetter and wetter. The sleeping sun was not yet awake, but a fiery, burning glow surrounded it above the treetops. Crunch went the grass underfoot.
Small, iced flakes lay on the leaves and a blurry mist hovered in the air.
The blue sky had gone, in it's place a dark, burnt fire. The buildings were dim boxes. The great oak was hidden under a thick fog.
Slowly I crept through the mist, ice beneath my feet giving me away.
Exploring, I was, through the cold fog. Beating, my heart was, for fear of hypothermia. Fog was blurring my gaze, frosted leaves drooping with wetness, frozen nests of sleeping birds.
The frost covered grass was white and cold.
How did it get here? Perhaps a giant bird had come and scattered it's white feathers across the ground.
Tuesday, June 5, 2012
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