maddy's hiding story

the sun goes down call out to my mum. a girl crawls past. i hide stay with fear that i will get found i want mum to call  other wise i can't see her but i can hear  her a big shadow comes at the back of me then it picks me up i scream it looked back there was my mum i was happy then we went home and got something to eat

It was eleven o'clock at nightIt was dark and scary and i was walking home.Iopen the door it wasdamp and dark.I looked back the jug was boiling i looked back again and no one was around then it stoped.I ran down the stairs and i locked myself in my room.Hmmm i couldn't find the light it wasloke i wasin a horror movie.A little bit of light shined through the window.