Wednesday, November 21, 2012
Monday, November 19, 2012
lost in the crematorium
''mum dad where are you I can't find you, please come out! plaese''.I will try to find you please come out! I walked around the frount. I saw them walking down the road so I ran and they jumped in the car. Ishouted to say stop they kept on going. I saw the undertaker making the coffin for my uncle besause he died. Afew days after thecoffin was made we went to the crematorium to grab the coffin. I got lost around the back of the crematorium. Isaw my aunty to tell her to take me home.
Ican smell death going down my throat so I ran to the van jumped in. aunty said ''where mum and? I said they're gone. Iwas lost around the back I was watching our uncle getting cremated. which means burnt. mum dad I got out of the van. Ran to my mum and dad! I finally found you. I hugged them and crying to them.
when I was in the van Iwaswrapped up, feeling pins and needles.Feels like a control vibrating. sounding sad to I was because I was shaking like a rumbling earthquake. Earthquakes are bigger than shaking yourself. My wish came true that my mum and dad came back, I cried when knowone was looking.
Ican smell death going down my throat so I ran to the van jumped in. aunty said ''where mum and? I said they're gone. Iwas lost around the back I was watching our uncle getting cremated. which means burnt. mum dad I got out of the van. Ran to my mum and dad! I finally found you. I hugged them and crying to them.
when I was in the van Iwaswrapped up, feeling pins and needles.Feels like a control vibrating. sounding sad to I was because I was shaking like a rumbling earthquake. Earthquakes are bigger than shaking yourself. My wish came true that my mum and dad came back, I cried when knowone was looking.
Hiding at cornwall park, Morgan
Hiding silently.Prickly,sore,thorny,holes in the bush.The smell of flowers and pollen creeps quietly up my nose.I can hear my brother talking to himself.I have to hide from my brother,in trouble.The very low bush reminds me of being under my bed with thorns.I have to stay hidden.
My legs are tired,stiff and shaking with soreness.I start getting worried.What if they never find me?,but then I remember something funny.I took of my shoes and hat by the lake to make my brother think.My body starts to shake with happiness.I start giggling to myself.I hope nobody heard me and I also hope I win this game.
Some short,blonde hair comes straight towards me.My heart pumping,pumping fast,I`m scared.I wonder who it is,oh it is only my brother,he must have heard me laugh.Lachlan comes creeping so quietly towards the bush.'' I've found you''he shouts.He splits the bush in two.''Ouch''he yells''I've got a thorn in my hand.''I feel really happy that I have won but sad that I have to go home now.
Isaiah,spot light in the orchad story
Ready or not here I come.The bitten apples have surrounded me.Black croaking crows and the whistling wind.In the tallest tree you can ever imagine.This is horror world. I snap branches to make a seat. I feel poor
My legs,arms,head are numb.This big body of mine feels like jelly.Cant move a muscle,they ve turned off.
I think they went to sleep.Come on Come on i can win this.OH NO! they re coming.The invisible people
have climbed up with me.They have brang there big pins and needles.PING PANG STAB!
The little sun moves left and right.You can tell Im the winner.His chattering teeth,hes always a whimp.I try turn around, a branch snaps and falls on his head.The torch went up.His face went pale.I crunch up as ball
.A giant ball.In my camouflage green.I found you Isaiah.I jump down.He says your the winner.Are you sure because wheres my evil twin?Perhaps hes in the real horror world Mmmmmwwwaa haaaa! AAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
THE END.
My legs,arms,head are numb.This big body of mine feels like jelly.Cant move a muscle,they ve turned off.
I think they went to sleep.Come on Come on i can win this.OH NO! they re coming.The invisible people
have climbed up with me.They have brang there big pins and needles.PING PANG STAB!
The little sun moves left and right.You can tell Im the winner.His chattering teeth,hes always a whimp.I try turn around, a branch snaps and falls on his head.The torch went up.His face went pale.I crunch up as ball
.A giant ball.In my camouflage green.I found you Isaiah.I jump down.He says your the winner.Are you sure because wheres my evil twin?Perhaps hes in the real horror world Mmmmmwwwaa haaaa! AAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
THE END.
Walking out the gate
Leaves surround me as they fall to the ground.The stench of grass gets to my nose.Dirt covers me, as i sit silently.Green leaves wrap around like a big green blanket.Hiding from my dad.I'm an adventurous little girl.
Sitting! I don't know what the time is.how long have I've been sitting ?My feet are sore.Pins and needles are running though my feet.Looking around at the leaves,path.I stop and listen i can't hear a thing looking around i see something crawl over.What is that?.
I listen i hear someone calls my name "briar briar"crawl back to the front of the bush.foot steps come closer and closer they stop where i am hiding.i giggle Mum grips me in a hug.Walking back i fall asleep thinking .
What will my next adventure be????
Go home, Stay home.
Mr Tregonning yells "GO". The taggers run into the game. You can't trust anyone. The big fence and tree makes me feel short. I take a step. "Crunch." I stept on a pile of crunchy brown leaves. Oh no! I'm surrounded with them. Birds chirping, leaves crunching and taggers tagging.
Will he find me, will I win, will I lose? My legs hurt, I must sit down. My arms are relaxed, I must wake them. My bum is numb, I must stand. He's coming. I must run, before it's too late.
Slowly walk around the tree. Don't make a noise, don't make any sudden movements. Laughter gets louder and louder. Then it stops. All that's left to do is run. Before I know it, the tagger is chasing Kaitlin, Emily and I. "GO HOME STAY HOME 123" Kaitlin, Emily and I screamed. I wish we could have another round. And we did.
By Charlene
Will he find me, will I win, will I lose? My legs hurt, I must sit down. My arms are relaxed, I must wake them. My bum is numb, I must stand. He's coming. I must run, before it's too late.
Slowly walk around the tree. Don't make a noise, don't make any sudden movements. Laughter gets louder and louder. Then it stops. All that's left to do is run. Before I know it, the tagger is chasing Kaitlin, Emily and I. "GO HOME STAY HOME 123" Kaitlin, Emily and I screamed. I wish we could have another round. And we did.
By Charlene
Hiding under the campervan
Hiding, under the camper van I was, the smell of green grass is deadly to my noise. Fireworks going off before my eyes. Scared. It was my first time under the camper van in the field.
shaking,It was like I was lying on broken glass. Flat on the grass trying not to laugh as my cousin trips and giggles. Is she going to look under here? Spiders dangling before me, web tickle my nose.I feel like I'm going to sneeze don't sneeze I told myself.
She is in front of me, I'm scared. Is she going to find me ..."Hi Monique" she says "I found you" "come out don't be shy" My cousin talks to the camper van be side me!
shaking,It was like I was lying on broken glass. Flat on the grass trying not to laugh as my cousin trips and giggles. Is she going to look under here? Spiders dangling before me, web tickle my nose.I feel like I'm going to sneeze don't sneeze I told myself.
She is in front of me, I'm scared. Is she going to find me ..."Hi Monique" she says "I found you" "come out don't be shy" My cousin talks to the camper van be side me!
ditching my brother
Hiding under the factory truck exhuast pipe black the same as the engine.
Stefan screams as he runs past us.
Liam and I have fuel up our nostrils.Tingling to annoy.
The dark factory rooms are threatening us.
I turn a sharp corner I'm suffocated by a leaking gas pipe. who will save me now ?
As some one darts around the corner im pulled back to safety.The freezing cold car park floor freezes me like nitrogine ice.My vision is dying ahh an rc bomb car.
foot steps echo through the car park.closer,closer and closer they come.Run its him!!!
We slide under the gate to the park as stefan finally finds an exit.
The door opens we are already [DEAD].my arms are still being eaten by aligators.
My nose is still smelling of fuel. I giggle to liam as he giggles back.
We end up coming home with mum already on our backs. looking like a wild dog about to kill its prey!.
Stefan screams as he runs past us.
Liam and I have fuel up our nostrils.Tingling to annoy.
The dark factory rooms are threatening us.
I turn a sharp corner I'm suffocated by a leaking gas pipe. who will save me now ?
As some one darts around the corner im pulled back to safety.The freezing cold car park floor freezes me like nitrogine ice.My vision is dying ahh an rc bomb car.
foot steps echo through the car park.closer,closer and closer they come.Run its him!!!
We slide under the gate to the park as stefan finally finds an exit.
The door opens we are already [DEAD].my arms are still being eaten by aligators.
My nose is still smelling of fuel. I giggle to liam as he giggles back.
We end up coming home with mum already on our backs. looking like a wild dog about to kill its prey!.
I'm lost in the Warehouse!
'Uh oh'. Barbie dolls stare at me like they're real. Footsteps stomp loudly. Emma and I panic. We search each aisle of the big, red building. Inside reminds me of Lego, only bigger. My sister runs away. Now there is nobody around. I'm frantically trying to spot my dad, I'm frantically trying to spot my sister. There's Emma, but where's Dad?
Nervous, scared, worried. I'm all of those things. I am a jelly-fish bobbing around with Emma. I'm scared. Shaking all over, I scamper down the next aisle. If I can't find my Dad, I'll have to go to the check-out and find help instead.
Go home, stay home
My hands felt rough bark, and I backed to the corner of the corrugated fence. A crunch was heard, I stept on a pile of leaves. Birds chirping was almost drowning out the yells of other kids. The scent of grass wafted around. Classrooms were far away, and so was the noise. Lee-Roy - the tagger - ran past in search of me.
I pressed my hands against the rough surface of the tree. My legs are getting tired, but I'm determined to win. A loud shriek interrupted my thoughts. Someone had been tagged! Lee-Roy is further away now. A few more steps, then I'm going to have to run for it.
I held my breath. Lee-Roy had stopped, and was just about to find me! It was definitely him, with the same dark hair and olive skin. He's yelling, getting tired of looking arund. Finally, my mind said he was far enough away, and I ran to the base. He didn't even see me! "Go home, stay home, one, two, three!" I yelled, gasping for breath. I nearly collapsed, both in tiredness and relief. Emily and Charlene were right behind me, but I'd won!
By Kaitlin
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